Liz, Lots of strong elements in this work! The sound, the overall aesthetic (blk&wht, scale, location, etc). Also the use of time as forwards/backwards works as the idea of the loop without actually looping.
A few edits at beginning can be smoothed :17 - :19. Frame :26 overlaps the protagonist slightly- can give more time before small scale behind trees frame. ASK ME HOW TO SMOOTH THIS OUT!
Also--- consider last frame of girl's face visible for longer duration (could be a still image).
Exciting to see your growth/development over the course of the semester. Re-work slightly to have strong/final work. consider submitting to student competitions!
Liz,
ReplyDeleteLots of strong elements in this work!
The sound, the overall aesthetic (blk&wht, scale, location, etc).
Also the use of time as forwards/backwards works as the idea of the loop without actually looping.
A few edits at beginning can be smoothed :17 - :19. Frame :26 overlaps the protagonist slightly- can give more time before small scale behind trees frame. ASK ME HOW TO SMOOTH THIS OUT!
Also--- consider last frame of girl's face visible for longer duration (could be a still image).
Exciting to see your growth/development over the course of the semester. Re-work slightly to have strong/final work. consider submitting to student competitions!